confused?
So are your characters idiots or just you?
"I'll slain all warriors" and "I will kill you and you will suffer" are not the mark of an artist - they are indicators that the author is a moron. Especially if you spelled "fair" as "fare." There is absolutely no reason why every character in the world showed up. I have no idea what this is other than 14-year-old fanboy drivel.
Also, in your description, "far more greater" is not English if that's what you were intending to speak. If you intend to create a product, make sure it is in a language that someone can read.