Boring
I gotta admit, at least you submitted something. Even though it was not very good. If you added some music it could have improved the quality of your work. The voiceover at the beginning was okay, but you should have used a different voice for the character. The slideshow of clips from a movie was cool. You could also improve by adding some screaming and maybe some flesh falling off to make a person burning more realistice, details are always a plus when making something. Overall a pretty good first shot at making a flash clip.