cool
i couldnt have done better myself
Reviews for "MDKA"
Crazymonkey154 responds:
wow thank you! do you mean it? sure, I can do so much better than this now but thanks anyway.
I'm just trying to help you!!
you've been animating longer then me, and I'm still better. you say you're the second krinkels,I',m better then you, I still suckss at it.so you're not the second krinkels! this is way overrated, this hardly deserves even 1,25.
you have to listen to critic! you can't take it with critic, the only thing you want is 10wich you doesn't deserve.
now, my review.
the walking didn't even make any sense they just moved there. the body,is a separate layer, everything is a seperate layer. hand,foot,head, etc.....
if they shot the body and head must move backward , not just stand there like some statues.if he hits someone, the hands isn't moving right straight, like it was in orbit or something. the art was also just sprites taken. draw something by yourslef, this time you only drew the background and it was poorly drawn, it's like I drew when I was 7 years old, I drew madness arenas and such then, but now.... It's just.......bad. unless it's some good artist that's making it.
the ''dudes'' just stand there, doing nothing. you can easily make them do something natural like, smoking. scratching his back, you know, talking to someone without text or voices, reading something, this is waste of your life. Go out and do something instead of getting over rated reviews.
the room with many guards, he just jumped in there. he can't just lie down there and shooting them of one at a time.
they actually shoot him before he even had time to do anything,especially not lying there.
and then, ''sorry you're not alowed to see this following violence.''
seriously, it's excensive violence. you've already have a warning there, saying:
EXCENSIVE VIOLENCE.
what's the point putting that censor thing there?
is it just that you're lazy so you didn't want to animate them?
I don't know.
it's just horrile. I had no idea what you were thinking when you saw my first review, I except it being pure hate.
you can't hate and inslut everyone that give yourovies critic. You insult them with pure hate. you can't do that here!
Newgrounds is a place with flash and music and chat and such, all succesful animators would've probably suck if it wasn't for critic that hepled them with advices.
now don't take this offensive. this is no offensvie at all. it's just help and advices.
if this review gets deleted, well that proves you can't take critic, and why even flag it!? it's just a review with some text. what's so vulgar in that?
I hope this response won't be an insult or a threat, or anything mean to me.
listen to the advices, you only live one time, use it to make something great out of it.
Crazymonkey154 responds:
ok first off, thank you for not being a total dickhole when reviewing this again. I know that this animation is very poorly animated. I have learned a whole lot since making it. And I admit that this WAS the first MADNESS animation I made. Also, I actually drew the heads and bodies myself. And I know to use loads of layers now. Also, about your first review for this submission..... yes, that one WAS pure hate..... it wasn't helpful at all. And yeah, I know the walking sucks ass in this.
Yeah, I guess I was kinda lazy when I made that censored part. But still, that was a long, long, time ago that I animated it. Before you even joined newgrounds. Before you even made your first account, Hankness.
And yes, there's so much that's changed since this animation. Thanks again for ACTUALLY giving tips this time. I now use lots of layers for characters. I also now make the head and body move back when a gun shoots (unless it's out of ammo, or if it's an SMG or assault rifle).
And yes, I CAN take criticism. Some people just THINK they're being helpful, but actually just being assholes and not really giving any helpful tips.
Also, I am well aware that there are better animators than me. People don't need to emphasize it for me. But still, there certainly are worse people who are than me at animating.
Pretty Good
I love the ending it was original but it was entertaining
Crazymonkey154 responds:
thank you for the review. glad you liked the ending.
I must say...
You did quite good on this animation. Just be a little bit more patient. But still, bravo...
Crazymonkey154 responds:
thanks for the review, glad you liked it. have more patience, you say? well, when I started working on this thing back a long time ago, I only had 2 weeks left until madness day. So that's why I didn't spend like a month or longer on it.
why?????
why did you yake of the fight when he kills the victims but its was good anyway
Crazymonkey154 responds:
well, glad you liked it. I don't know what you mean by "yake of the fight", though. But still, thanks for the review.