Great!!
But whats with screw ups in the sound? Are you using code for the sounds or are you using the time line? Fix that and you got a 10!
PS: Once you're done with the series, totally send it all to Nintendo and ask them what they think of all of it! If they think its good, you could end up being Shigeru's successor! Honestly this is so awesome that I honestly cant believe that u arent Shigeru Miyamoto himself! If they say yes though, you should make it so that you create a Newgrounds developement team, and all of us Animators, Artists and Programmer's can help out (PLEASE PICK ME SO I HAVE A LEGITIMATE EXCUSE TO SKIP SCHOOL AND GO TO JAPAN! I can do posters and stuff. Plus, I can do still shots, concept art, sketches, what ever u need!