Not bad at all
I took off a couple points for a couple reasons.
#1: I would've liked to hear it go longer than 40 seconds. You got a good flow, but it was too short for me to get into.
#2: Scaffolding doesn't build bars, it builds buildings. So technically that metaphore didn't work out as well. But you were fresh the rest of the time.
Seems like we got some good artists this year. Good luck in the comp.
Stay up,
Nimbus The General
4.30 / 5.00 (+ 0.13)
good warm up=) Welcome to the ring=P
this is alright
wrote in five seconds? i hope not cuz half these rhyme words are some ive heard Em say in his last couple leaked tracks. anyways. gl in the comp!
#HHH
This was pretty straight.. You got a nice voice, you should take advantage of that.
The score would be higher if the song was longer..
I don't know too much about this contest but from what I see, Your going to have a really hard time beating Nimbus's submission.
-RMP