Couldn't finish it...
Learn to f**king talk you overly-dramtic nerds. The sentences were almost complete nonsense, the voice acting just horrible and a script that makes most pornos sound like they deserve emmy's. The overly dramtic shit was just unbearable. The animation(ish) wasn't bad, it was graphicaly sound, I just can't get by how anoying I got by the whole thing. This could have been great if you worked on the script just a little (because thats all you would have to do, just a little bit of editing) work on the script.
Example: "Visiblity 0" if you wanted to be dramatic why not actually choose a plausable number? First of all visiblity isn't represented by numbers unless by machine, and if it were, you would never get 0 as the reading unless the quipment was broken. I know this seems like petty stuff but cinimaticaly it matters.