Fair game
The game is nice overall, good graphics, so that's 9/20.
The controls are not the best, you should have given us a better way to move. wasd / arrow keys and mouse for aim, and click to shoot would have been better.
6/10 for the gameplay, seeing the controls. Thus, my overall mark is 7/10 and 3/5.
Upooo, let me say you're dumb. You're not even a critic, you're just a funky guy who doesn't have hte slightest idea about how much work a simple click and move game takes. It took me 1 week to just model a 3d figure and make it walk decently, and you just go say this game is shit because of his controls. I understand you're just a kid, but learn to appreciate a person's effort. This must have took him months to make, and you go happily saying your nonsense and dropping his expectations >:(
Keep it up mate, you have a good idea about what a game should have, and included the action pretty well. And if people aren't good enough to learn each game's controls, don't mind them. They're still growing up ^^.