Hmmmm.....
Personally I apologize for having to say the following,
#1 Excellent flash video, graphics were fantastic and the lightning effects looked great too.
However.... #2 The "poetry" within was less than satisfying, it was dull and repetitive,
#3 There was absolutely 0 story to it and it leaves me wondering just what happened, and you fail to fully explain the reason behind it or what happened afther he crashes ( Assuming of course that he did )
All that can be assumed by your dedication at the end is that you messed up and are still hung up about your mistake, and that's about as far as it goes.
So in summation, I'm giving you 5 out of 10, 50% for the wonderful visuals, But I'm keeping the other 50% because it expained nothing along the lines of what could be considered a story or history behind it,
But Keep up the good work and try a little harder to make a story and not just a visual of past occurences. This reminded me of the movie back to the future ( terrible movie that it was ) because if you look into the past without knowing anything about it, not only do you not know what in god's name is going on, but your also not really interested in finding out, I fought several urges to just turn it off because it held no interest for me, But I do see several ways that I could like it, if only it explained more in depth what was going on and why.
and no I'm not trying to stifle your creativity, I'm merely suggesting that you EXPAND your story, Again keep up the good work and good luck on future endeavors.