WOW!
wow this was about the best flash toon i have seen! *spechless*
Reviews for "Leftovers"
Good creativity
The film just carry on with the theme leftover through out. Before u know it, it was over. And the fact that the story will continue ithout u making it makes me feel a continue on life, which is terrific. Great job!
All my fives, take them
The best part about this flash is how I continually was impressed as it went on, until the credit roll when the culmination of the story blew me out of my seat. This flash gives me something to point to when arguing for flash as a progressive art medium, and basically does everything right.
The biggest criticism one could have with this flash is that it is "lazy," only requiring one scence and therefore little animation. I think this criticism is pretty godawful, both because simplicity in animation and less work does not necessarily beget a worse piece, and because I think the story is more powerful and effective when presented all in one shot. The actual graphics/ art is pretty awesome anyway, with the color selection and sepia-esque ambitions being especially notable. Everything flowed smoothly, and the style was just lovely in general.
On to the story. The primary criticism in this area is the length/ exciting content ration, which is a bit high for the more impatient of us. I think the protracted pace really accentuated the flow of the story, as it felt as if the flash was presenting us a picture of a life in one six-minute act. The story as a whole was pretty brilliant, discussing the absurdity of life and success in a way I've never seen in flash. The humor only helped this meaning come through, as the audience laughs at the the dead woman's bra being used for profit even after death, and the ridiculous improbibility of the couple's ambitions.
I was grinning at the beauty of this piece throught its duration, and can't see how I give it any less than a ten.
FREELENS responds:
Wow! Now that's review! Thanks!
wow
really...really great, i love your style. funny too.
Should have had the pink car folks hit the bastard child though!
nice
awsome great animtaion great ideas and awsome screenplay 10/10 but the birds dieing was kinda mean buts thats just me otherwise aswome job