that was beautiful
that was beautiful.... (cries for joy) (sniff sniff)
that was beautiful
that was beautiful.... (cries for joy) (sniff sniff)
Episode 2 is released!!! Serious apologies for the major wait and quality but i had to retrieve files from my hard drive years ago that crashed!
pretty good
overdone story, pretty good animation. the sound got fuzzy every once and awhile, but was fine for the most part. it looked good too. nice work, cant wait for part 2 the cliffhanger, damn the cliffhanger.
Episode 2 is released!!! Serious apologies for the major wait and quality but i had to retrieve files from my hard drive years ago that crashed!
Okay
It was a bit edgy but I think, like my own series, that this can go a long way. The story wasn't the problem though, it's some of the animation, not all, some. The symboling was off a bit, but it should catch on.To be perfectly honest with you, I could never piece it together the way you did.
Flash is hard and boring, but if you take more time on the sequel, it may be like I'm watch Joe Zombie or Castle 3. The story isn't really the problem, it's the slight rush in animation. Just be a little more patient next time. It's a virtue. ;)
Thanks for the honest comment. I hope one day to finish the second episode... although i had to start over due to an unfortunate hard drive crash.
But i hope episode 2 will get better reviews :)
cool
that was cool
Such potential,
Yet poorly executed. You had good quality in this. The length was good, and you attempted a storyline.
The graphics need improvement, the use of radiants really killed the mood. You should practice a animation a bit more, the stick fights could have been much more interesting and had more length. Voice acting would have been nice, but I understand that it can be difficult to find people willing to work for you. Also, the storyline was quite cliche and has room for improvement, but its just a stick rampage, after all. The whole movie felt like the beginning to an action arcade videogame.
For a first submission, this is really good. I think in a while you should think about redoing it with more detail and less radiants. I hate radiants.
Good Luck.