Good point, terrible presentation
I agree with your point. There are too many abusive reviews left for Flash movies and games. Unfortunately, there are also people who associate criticism with being abusive and get perfectly reasonable reviews deleted. It's the reason why certain Flash movies have low scores but high review scores.
Writing a flash is bad or flawed is not abusive. Sometimes, there is very little redeemable about a Flash movie, not due to a dislike of the author, but the piece itself is without merit because it consists of merely a static image or a three second loop.
About this Flash, it's okay. I like the interactivity that you provide by making the movie advance through butons. However, the screenshots are a bit cramped. While we can zoom in, because you have authored this Flash, it's incumbent upon you to make the piece aestehtically pleasing to the audience.
Also, please put a background behind your text that makes it readable. Green text against a screenshot is illegible and it turns people off from the position you are trying to argue.