Well...
Well this just coming from a person who didint always have sound, but seriousley, what you need to add is captions. And its not like its hard ether. Anyway I found this quite funny in some parts, but not in all. The graphics of it were okay, but again not great. It would have been nice if you made the etxt readable too. Sure you knew what he said, but it was annoying looking at it anyway. All in all, not a bad submission, but not a great one.
Humpty was rhyming at first. It was weird, because he didn't do it later. Then again, it might have been unintentional. I especially like the voice of one of the guards. They sounds like the banana guards from "Adventure Time!". I liked the live-action bits.
It's just that this was too long. You didn't really do that many interesting things with it. I guess I was just expecting a parody. The animation wasn't that good either. It's just forgettable for me.