You're trying too hard.
Not everything has to have a SFX to it. Make sure that you put the right SFX in the right place.
You're trying too hard.
Not everything has to have a SFX to it. Make sure that you put the right SFX in the right place.
Not Great.
Work a bit on the the drug induced animations and the intro.
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looks quite promising, can't wait to see the rest of the cartoon...^_^