Reviews for Stick and Stick Episode 1

[Coop]

Could use some fine-tuning

Well, the concept was certainly one that's been done before. However, with a little fine tuning, I can see you making this into a decent movie.

1) Zoom in while drawing, to give you greater control of the cursor and help you to draw more rounded figures. Maybe consider buying a graphics tablet?

2) Make a black space underneath the movie pictures. In this, type the subtitles, as it saves you a) animation space and b) makes them easier to read. Perhaps consider an 'advance button', which would allow faster readers to skip the text when they've read it - some gaps were too long.

3) Soundtrack - maybe add further tracks, like something with a pumping base beat for the combat, as the track you used wasn't something I'd ever consider for a fight between two men - not even camp men.

4) Colour - A change of colour for one of the guys help tell them apart during the fight.

Hope you work with these changes and I look forward to seeing the second episode.

[Review Request Club]

[Markface]

Well... that was different.

I must admit, I admired the ironic sense of stickman bashing in this.

The animation was funny, would have been amplified with your own voice.

The visuals were poor, though that only helped further the elements of comedy in this.

It was ok.

[TheBoogley]

Put in some more time

This is it's current state is hard to watch, I reckon you should spend time on smoothing things out so we can follow the action, maybe lower the frame rate. Crusty stick figures and ideas off the top of your head are great, it seems like something pis funny i around the corner...

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean. I just noticed too that my frame rate was a bit too high. I guess I'll lower it to 15 fps.

Thanks for the review.

[FrozenSheep]

Well...

...That was different.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

>=( Hater