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Reviews for "Stick Vs. Sprite Part 1"

bad

one word for it bad.2 tips 1)work on flash skills 2)take your time it will probably be better.

KingKombat responds:

go easy plz. this is my first solo submission to make it past judgement. dont worry! i promise a much beter sequel!

Not bad

I enjoyed the animation, but here are a few things that would help make it better.

1. The length of the animation was too short, you might want to add about 1 another minutes to the battle before declaring the winner.
2. Even though you used your best drawing skills, the stick man could be improved.
3. One of the big things I found was the fps, I can understand the sprite being hard but the stickman had a great opportunity to show off some moves, but it was held back because each frame jumped to one and other too quick. What I mean was it was like watching a slideshow of just pictures.
4. Add some cool nifty voices, not those stupid auto-speech Microsoft ones, I mean some authentic ones. Download a program called "audacity" (It's free) and you can record your voice, then manipulate it to make it sound like someone completely different.

I'm going to give this a 3, and save it because of your hard work and effort, but I would like to see Sprite vs Stick Part2 with these above improvements. If you found this review helpful can you please PM telling me what you thought.

Good luck with the next submission.

KingKombat responds:

1. it was slightly meant to be short...
2. yes i realize that....
3. this was basically an experiment to see how good the drawings would be and stuff.
4. is that available for mac? (and how Do i do those microsoft voices?)

Curious

Waiting for your sequel

KingKombat responds:

remember, vote 5!

not good...

but not bad either. could have been longer and somewhat more well thought out... but you're on the right track.

KingKombat responds:

cool. thanks for the review.

wow awsome hope you make more!

Wow this is really awesome! you should make more!

KingKombat responds:

awesome! thanks! im really glad you liked it!