A little to cartmanish...
The ending was good but the voice acting just sounded like cartman with down syndrom (s/p), i did chuckle once though, and the animation was better then somethings on here, but i just wasnt a big fan of it (even though i do like your other submissions) just put a little more work into the humor and the length of it next time and you'll come to at least a 8 out of 10 with me. Obviously some people must like it though because it made front page.
-vegas