I just read the last review and...
Sorry to say Zach but this does look too similar to AGENT SMILEY.
http://www.newgroun ds.com/portal/view.php?id=3930 4
(take out the random space)
and there's no way yours is better than that! Your's is a big pile of steaming piss compared to Spiders one. Yours looks like a rip-off from his. Do something origonal and do it in your own style.