Nice made.
You can already tell this is going top be a great series.
Reviews for "Nintegaball GT: Ep. 1"
Not bad for an independant flash
Ok, here I present the first and most important thing to remember, your flash cannot be considered good if you label it as a spin off to SMBZ. SMBZ Stands in another league of its own and should be left that way. In its own right Nintegaball is not a bad concept or flash and i would have rated it a 7/10 However you seem to be trying to compete with something that cannot be rivaled. With the label you give it one cannot help watching it while refering it to SMBZ leaving a feeling a hollowness about it.
Now for the minor details, 1st, instead of leaving the respectable Nintindo and Sega characters to their own personalities, you appear to be forcing them to change to match some DBZ counterpart. this is something that Alvin does not attempt. When you strive for this the flash does not flow well.
Lastely, the story is in no way whatsoever original. It feels like something i wrote when i when i was 12. It is predictable not to mention that the dialog is choppy and needs adjustment.
With that i leave you to continue your work. hopefully we as an audience will see this series evolve toward something great. I am not trying to be condecending i only wish to see something as revolutionary and epic as SMBZ without feeling as if it shows itself as a cheesy rip off. Thank you and Good Luck!!!
Damn...
This was a very good flash.
Next time, a little more action
Nice beginning BTW
better than i expected!
when i heard of this i just thought it would be a smbz rip off with no story line at all. you proved me wrong!!! well done good effort
its good
make sure ep 2 comes out soon