it was good
it was good don't get me wrong... just not brakenwood good. should, could, would, wood,
Reviews for "The Myth Of Sisyphus"
CatFat responds:
I didn't expect it to be and nore should you since im only 14
Very Impressive
This submission to the portal is indeed a very coveted one, and while the animation is truly something to behold I do not entirely agree that it is fitting for the brackenwood collection.
cool
I think it was really well done but there were so things that I didn't like. I feel sorry for the dude because he had to roll that boulder many times.... T_T
Had a very brackenwoodish feel to it.
It was very good very well done.
The reasons of reasons
I am going to say why people tell you why this looks so much as adams work, this cave man has his whole face covered with hair just as adams character, he grunts and does not speak another reason why, then there is a scene in adams flash where his character drinks as well.
As well the style of trees and forest is the very same and the way that the caveman runs around the forest is the very similar (the effects of background I mean)
I dont want to push you down because you have great potencial and you are really good...Hell Id like to be able to do something similar than your flash. Rather have done your flash than nothing for sure.
What you have got to do next is work on originality, make sure that you look other flashes than adams and obtain their inspirations too and they way of animating and drawing. Then after observing diferent styles make something that determines to be you and so for your work to have your own signature, something that we can resemble to be your work and not phillips or anyone elses.
You are really good I hope that you come out with something that does not show obsesion with another artists as I am sure that you have your ideas of your own and for sure originality too.
BTW great job I enjoyed the flash.