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Reviews for "Intercourse"

On point

I can really tell you worked hard on this song. You have always had an incredably disinct voice in all of your productions. Airy leads create a fantastical atmosphere for your gritty and often off the walls reeces to penetrate through. This creates an ever changing environment to keep any listener constantly engaged. This is your sound becoming further refined and presented through the medium of dubstep. Seeing how dubstep is on top of the world right now, I see this as an opportunity for you to make your mark on the scene with a sound far more interesting than your colleagues.

Quarl responds:

thank goodness it's fruent :)

There's something great here...

I'm just honestly finding it hard hard to sift through the bad stuff to find it.

The bass is incredibly programmed when done in chords, it gives this great feel to it, but it feels like it's far to de-tuned, even for what you're going for in tis song. It's a bit too all over the place for my tastes.

Besides that bass, I felt the overall composition was very well done.

PS; that bass really is broken, you need to work on it :\

Quarl responds:

i worked my ass off on that "broken" patch. i spent an entire day just working on the lfo patterns. don't tell me to work on it more when everything in it is exactly the way i wanted it.

i do not like dubstep.

but this is purrrty damn good. i wouldnt really call it dubstep though considering people like the guy below will immediately say the lead is wrong just because it doesnt sound like super wub wub base from planet stupid shit. personally i think the roughness of it compliments the rest of the song perfectly. there was like 1 or 2 high pitch spikes that pierced my brain though.

Quarl responds:

woah, thanks man. actually, this is my first real dub step track. that wub wub effect is just a lfo. I use it a lot in this song just at a much faster tempo and with a shit ton of syncopations. My main gripe with dub step has always been how lazy and repetitive that LFO gets. why make your synth go "wub wub wub wub" when you can make it go "WUB SQUUEeeeealllch WUB WUB DOTTILY DOOT DOOTILY DOOT?"

also, i'll go fix those high pitch noises. i mixed this on monitors so sorry if your wearing cans :(

its...

i personally think you need a new bass lead, maybe a deeer bass where you can build around the wubs and cutoffs. the bass or whatever that instrument you have sounds really rough and scratchy. i actually listened all the way through and i think your lead takes away from the beauty of the melody. when working on dubstep try working around the melody more, it will make it more pleasant on peoples ears.

Quarl responds:

word. pro advice right here. thanks mozart.

Nice work!

I downloaded this to my dubstep set to listen to while driving. The entire song is well done and fine tuned. The lead? Loved it :)

10/10
5/5

Quarl responds:

thanks :)