Nice but needs improvement.
I liked your art but there were a couple of problems;
1. Voice acting was honestly pretty bad.
2. The blood animation was bad.
3.Music was horrible sorry. If that is what type of music you are into thats fine but when submitting think of the wider audience.
Other than those i really liked the art and great effort put into it. Well done. I dont mean to sound mean im just offering critical feedback. thanks!