Mediocre
- Pros -
Pretty amusing.
- Cons -
Bad art & animation.
= Suggestions =
Look at some of the drawing tutorials on Newgrounds and add some music.
Reviews for "Promising Young Athletes"
RandomStar responds:
I might look at the tutorials, thanks for the suggestion!
lol
that wasn't too bad coulda been better though
RandomStar responds:
Yeah, I know, I'll remake it when I get better. Thanks anyway!
Not bad for a first
The voice acting could have been more believable (where were the shrieks of terror and/or pain?!?) and the ideas could have been more extensive, like a pole vault into the audience or a discus travelling with the kid still holding on. Otherwise, it was great for beginning!
RandomStar responds:
I already had planned that the guy with the metal ball (I don't even know what it's called) was gonna fly away holding on to what he was throwing, and doing the same joke twice would only seem repetative. Thanks anyway!
funny
this was good but what was the first guy doing curling? disc golf? this was really good though
RandomStar responds:
Discus, my artwork aint that good, thought you'd be able to figure it out by the way he's throwing it. Anyway, thanks!
not to bad
work on your animation skills and try a lil harder to keep the attention of the people and you might have something here :D
i admit i wanted to close the windo because of too much time spinning but the jokes kept me watching. not bad :D
RandomStar responds:
Will do, thanks!