Hey finally some one to help me top xcore!
keep it up! I like the mix of strings and synths at the start.
bassy enough for me, but thats just because I listen to music in my car with a sub.
the 1:00 break down is great
One thing that might help you out is to take some samples or different bass instruments and mix up the dubstep wobble stuff you've got going on to make it more complex. I'm barely just starting to produce dubstep, though, so you don't have to listen to me.
check out my personal jesus dubstep remix :)