Work on the art!
I would have rated it better, but the artwork for the people was really bad...
Reviews for "Tutorial of Flash art"
Flashmovieboy responds:
Okay, but thanks anyway!
Uh...
This is well made...VERY well made. But it lacks information. Most of this stuff won't help you like the 3D part. REDO
Flashmovieboy responds:
Thanks. I know 3D part was missing, but i thought that shading is enough!
You're "tired of bad designed and lazily done art"
"I am tired of bad designed and lazily done art tutorials."
So why are you adding to the mess? There's nothing that special about your art, you have a long way to go, and the steps weren't very helpful about how to achieve the result you did.
Both you and your tutorial to have a long way to go in my opinion, try improving your own skills, and adding more steps and show more animations of how you actually drew what you did - then you might be getting somewhere.
Flashmovieboy responds:
Thanks for constructive critcs! I mean't with that sentece, that many, many tutorials of art that i've seen is even worst..
I'm sorry
The only good thing about this tutorial was linkin park, and you didn't even choose their best songs.
Try drawing random things on paper with a pen over and over again, and practice basic shapes and proportion.
I have to give it to you though, if you didn't use an online translator your english is quite good for a 14 year old.
Flashmovieboy responds:
Thanks! But that wasn't best linkin park songs? I think that Leave out All the Rest was very good song...
Simplistic
Too simplistic; the tutorial doesn't really go in depth with anything new. A lot of it is very basic, and probably the only useful (though not hard to figure out on one's own) is the filter tutorial...but thats it. Looks nice, but not very pleasing overall!
Flashmovieboy responds:
Okay, just that tutorial is more mean't to basic flash player's teaching. But if subjects won't teach you, then think, how they can help someone else!