yh good
yh it was cool i enjoyed it but i think the voices were abit messed up , but oh well atleast i could understand what they were saing :D .. thanks
Reviews for "Principled Depravity"
LogFish responds:
You could understand them? Crap!
It was good
I was surprised, based on your history and after watching the first thirty seconds of this, I'd expected it to be some kind of stupid public service announcement... "don't do drugs kids." But it was actually very sinister and good. The one notable problem I saw was the voices. The guy talking always seems too cheerful and lighthearted for the situation.
LogFish responds:
Haha, oh I'm a cheerful and lighthearted guy. Thanks though, I'll be working on that! Glad you liked it, and managed to push through the start heh. (My only review with a 0 was a guy who went on a 'how dare you diss marajuana' rampage haha -clearly too whacked up to notice I ddin't actually critique drugs at all!)
I enjoyed it immensely
I enjoyed it immensely! More for its potential than the actual flash, which by the way as pretty good! :)
It did seem to drag on a bit in spots, some tighter editing (sequencing) would work wonders, it could easily have been a full minute shorter without loss.
Funny bit: When he loads and cocks his gun, then whacks bad guy over the head..next scene, he reloads his gun! (funny)
Unnatural movements, no fire (on truck) and poor explosions, all of these will improve in time as the author adds more tricks to his bag, no doubt!
will come back later to follow the series.
ps, good chapter layout, looked and felt just like a DVD!
LogFish responds:
Thanks for reviewing - glad you enjoyed it! I do intend to tighten it all up in the future so hopefully the next ep will be a ball-kicker :)
Pretty good
The graphics were a little sparse, but that sort of fit the mood for this one. The audio was also a little scratchy, you might want to invest in a better mic if you plan on doing a lot of videos. Nice 3D-ing, overall a good flash
LogFish responds:
I've got one now, didn't use it for this Flash though - and the sound quality having to be at 16kps didn't do any favours for the mic either! Hopefully it'll be good in the next one - thanks for the review!
Nicely done, but unnatural movement
Quite nicely done. However, there are two relatively important points that could use improvement.
Firstly, the sound quality is low, voice especially. It sounds like it's been clipped to my ear (I'm no sound engineer though)-try recording at a lower volume to minimize clipping and amplify as necessary.
Next, the animation is rather erratic and unnatural. Specifically, the characters' movements don't feel natural. A prime example of this is when the main character is running to his car to chase the men who kidnapped his wife-that doesn't look like he's running at all. The movements of the man hitting somebody (the camera is in the victim's PoV) also feel awkward.
LogFish responds:
Thanks - those're good criticisms, I'll be working on those in future episodes! Most useful, cheers.