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Reviews for "Spaceoidz"

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I'm not quite sure what that was. The spinning stars made me dizzy though. Not in a good way.

Not Bad

Intresting i hope u make longer with in depth story line

Not bad...

But could be better, a lot better. You seem rather talented, and I enjoyed you're animating. The only thing lacking was more or less the story telling; rather vague, short, and I really couldn't follow anything. There's nothing wrong with random humor; which is what I think you where going for. There still needs to be more direction, it doesn't matter if it's serious or just a silly plot; you need to better lead people through the story.

A couple things to do would be: greater length, go into more detail, be it characters of surroundings. Oh and don't forget cause and effect; some your humor had a lot of effect and no cause. Just make sure to let us know what, or why so and so is happening...

P.s. I checked out you're other flash, and it wasn't half bad, so keep at it :3