Alrighty, so:
Beautiful artwork, is this an artist collab?
Too many half-naked, or maybe naked, girls. Is this a MUST for japanime stuff? Cmon.
Has potential.
Reviews for "noframe preview"
Well...
That lacked any sense whatsoever... Though I like the chibi style you use (When the two are on the bench)
I'm tired of seeing previews.
Artists are getting lazy with their flash productions. Most previews that are submitted to the flash portal are never made into projects.
It has potential but you need to start submitting previews to NG ALPHA and not newgrounds itself.