Intrigued... needed to be desired though...
The storyline/music was a spicy mix that captivated me... but there were things that could have been touched up a bit...
-the voiceover sounded too "amatuer" and sounded like a cassette recording
-the image of the face looked just a bit cheesy... i know... i could tell that was most likely meant to be... but still could make the rest of your theme line up...
...other then that...
IT WAS COOL!