Not Bad
This wasn't say overly spectacular but it showed how you have some decent potential at flash. The animation wasn't realy bad at all considering it was your first. But it wouldn't kill you to add some detail next time. :p
Reviews for "Red: A Morphmation"
Interesting, but your style needs work.
Definitely not bad. I actually enjoyed it. The whole abstract change of scene made it interesting, but you need to work on the individuality of your style. It's very basic and very similar to almost all beginners.
Also, the animation wasn't very smooth at some parts, like the box dropping on the ladybug, which could definitely been prevented by using more detail, like show the box flatten out and regroup a little when it hits the ground. Subtle stuff like that makes a flash really good.
Clayman2 responds:
Thanks! I didn't really take physics into consideratio there, but I should have. I do realize whta you're saying though, effects likethat give ach animator their character. Thanks for the tip, I'll be sure to remember it.
Not bad
With some better graphics and maybe some music syncing, this could be pretty good.
Cool
Graphics-8 Pretty good i loved it.
Lengh-lasted a while it was cool i liked all of it pretty amusing.
Style-Random and cool i loved the style morphmation is pretty cool.
Overall-nice flash keep up the good work i really liked this are you planning on making more?
Clayman2 responds:
Actually, I probably will make a ew more, taking into consideration what everyone has said. I've recieved some good tips, andi plan to use them. So yes, look out for more in the futute.
pretty cool
haha thats pretty cool and the music deffinatly went with it
(yes i know i spelt deffinatly wrong haha)