so-so
this had no real point and the joke was not that good but O WEL
Reviews for "Shy Guys [OLD]"
Ronscoe responds:
It was supposed to have a point?
Umm... Well...
I think you should try harder next time. I mean, I'm not saying this is bad but theres great room for improvement. For one thing the audio, it was clear, like you could understand it and all, but it was very quiet. Another thing is I didn't find the plot to amusing. Maybe just turn the noise up and write a better/funnier script and your set to go!
Ronscoe responds:
I had a script?
okay.... Take a bit more time next flash..
well for starters.... I think that this needs to be longer and a bit more funny to really survive the portal next go around... you spent too much time on talking then you did doing anything. if your going to make a short. make it crack a joke or 2 before the user gets bored enough to turn it off. such as ackbar or any short for instance.. go check out some more portal entries before you attempt another flash movie. On the upside, the timing with the animation and vocals was perfectly matched. that was probably your strength in this movie. the spriting was well ripped and it looked fine. Try for a better plot of somekind before you attempt another flash or something.. This flash has the look of something made in a few minutes... a good portion of people do not appreciate most flashes that look like they were thrown together in a few minutes/hours. Only a quality submission will pass through the newgrounds portal. The main idea of this episode was fine but next time make it more funny than a whole bunch of shy guys makeing random noises and one guy falling over because of it. SO TRY harder!!!!!
Ronscoe responds:
i'm working on it.
little bit more
The comedy is a little weak, u might want 2 fix it
Ronscoe responds:
I kinda made it up as I was going, so it was crap.
nothing to see here
seriously it's technologically sound but the humor is nearly non-existant