I feel your SHAME!
I used to work at a pizza place and we had some really stupid managers. god, i hated them...
the only real prob i had was their hats...from the front view they looked kinda fucked...all melty or something...i dunno.
Reviews for "Shame by the Slice"
Honestly...
...pretty generic the wasy you can improve is making the mexican sound like a mexican I mean seriously I don't sound like that and neither do any of my eses and just voices sounding better animation looks alright the character looks about average and I liked the intro part the best with the kid getting bear and the fat girl/boy not washing his hands or anything that part was good you should make that in the sequel
BaconMask responds:
I'll try better next time. Thanks a lot for reviewing, though!
it was ok
yea...well it was kinda funny i just didnt like that style of graphics but it was all ok
BaconMask responds:
Well, I can totally respect your opinion. I'm always trying to get better! Thanks a lot for the review!
Shame?
The title doesn't seem to work and the storyline is slow to the point. A lot of time went into the production, that's clear. Animation shows good work. Need to bring two together.
BaconMask responds:
The Official title was "Revenge of the Floating Manager", but I guess I forgot to tack it on.
Thanks for taking the time to review!
Ok, I guess...
I mean don't get me wrong your animation is good, the characters look pretty good while talking, but overall the movie was nothing but average crap.
Pros:
1. As stated the animation was good.
2. The loading screen was cool.
3. The Hispanic guy was kinda funny.
Cons.
1. This is my biggest gripe the dialog seemed forced, I assume you did all the voice work because when ever one character talked to another there were long pauses and you could tell the different audio files were being played.
2. The characters were kind of stupid, and I found myself not being able to relate to them.
3. The floating manager was too off the wall, to quote Gary Marshall "For something to be funny it has to be based in reality."
4. It seemed to me like the characters had no relationships with each other, like it was the first time they had met.
5. The way it ended, I mean a cliffhanger is ok but you cut off before the guy could even finish the last word he was saying.
Hopefully the next episode will improve on this one. I will continue to watch at least for a couple more episodes, because I see a lot of potential in this seris.
BaconMask responds:
I do appreciate the critique, but I have to disagree. I don't think that it's at all average crap.
I ran into some techincal issues with the voices clipping at the end. It's happened to me before with other toons and I can't find a way around it. Hopefully it won't plauge the next part.
I'm editing up the next part right now, and I'm cutting out some dialouge (dialogue?) slack, so it should flow a little smoother.
Well, I guess not everyone's going to like it, and that's ok. I do hope you give the second half a chance. I think you may like it! I hope, anyway. Thanks a ton for your honesty! It does help.