Keep at it, I loved this.
I thought this was great and deserved a higher score, especially compared to alot of the sprite movies and such that get 4.00+. There's just a few points that let it down, for one the vocals were barely audible, so notch them right for a start.
Secondly, the timing was sometimes off in parts. If there's a pause for too long and it's not intentional, you should move on to the next characters dialogue.
Other than that I liked it, the graphics were good for what they were, some good fbf and smooth animation for the most part. It's no worse than mine so I'd say that's good thing.
Make more, cause I likes them.