Great!
I really did like the animation style...although the main character did look a bit fat at one point...But still good nevertheless 0o
Reviews for "[FS] Shadow"
fadedshadow responds:
sorry about that lol
Great
Interesting
fadedshadow responds:
quite
good
Good work, but it is hard to make something as good as lilium, you need better graphics to impres. and i didn't get it: who died the man or the shadow?
fadedshadow responds:
the shadow died, the man jumped in the air and slashed at him anime style lol
Bloodiest silent movie ever
Some nice style there, I enjoyed the silent-movie style cut-aways for dialouge, although it was difficult sometimes to figure out who was speaking at a given time. Also, and this isn't just you, it goes for everyone, please check spelling and grammar with someone else before you finish up. If you're in school, you have a teacher that will gladly proofread for you, trust me, the poor saps dream of people asking them for help.
If you're not in school, just ask a couple friends. Spelling and grammar can make a real difference in the overall feel of anything with written language. Flash, movies, books, w/e.
Anyways, good job, keep practicing, I'll be looking forward to what comes next.
fadedshadow responds:
yea i'm gonna add that to my commentary, where the blood looks darker and less red is when the shadow speaks and when the blood is a little brighter and more red, thats when the man is speaking....but it's always to figure it out for yourself, ya know?