It's not bad! Make some more!
I liked it, good job. Why are you undergoing depression? Just keep making flashes and sooner or later you could be on frontpage or something dont let it get to your head about what other people do.
Reviews for "Clayland - Muffins"
TechFlash responds:
thanks so much! These good reviews are really lifting my spirit! I'm actyually undergoing depression from people from another website coming to rate my films badley.
not bad one
that was an alright claymation. pretty random overall, but the randomness in this one was cool and your efforts were nice.
Better
Better than your other ones, but work on the sound a little.
Pointless and Humorless
Hmm, not good, but something to build on. Try these:
Suggestions:
You seem to love the new "explosion" move to your movies. I think that could be animated better.
The arms falling off is not funny.
Just because Knox made something doesn't mean it will immediately funny by you. Get original.
The whole thing is less than a minute.
Review it. Build on it. Try again.
Watch your movie through before posting it. This could be better.
TechFlash responds:
thank you for the advice drbobspatient, i will try to make my movies better like how you said.
Another Knox rip-off.
Dude, you have GOT to stop stealing knox's ideas and putting them in your "movies". I see that you've watched Pancake Mines a few more times before you were so inspired by it and decided to reenact some of it. I see, you've killed people with muffins instead of pancakes (Not very original) and you've used Knox's random death ideas (you've worn those out now). You couldn't have worked hard on this movie cause it was very similar to 'Don't Run With Scissors', except this was even more plotless. You never take suggestions from people and that's why your movies keep failing. If you want better scores, then use your own ideas, and make them funny.
TechFlash responds:
I do not find this in any relation to pancake mines. But if thats how you feel, thats fine with me :).