Reviews for J's Grassland 1

[Pelemus-McSoy]

Awesome!

This was one of those "WTF?!" kinda Flashes...I like it! Definitely original! Also, you're a fantastic artist!

If I may, I have a couple of suggestions for sequels:

1. Follow the birds' lives and see how they interact with all sorts of things they see during their travels.

or...

2. Focus on the manetee, and have multiple creatures come and go, and see what their reactions are to the manetee's bizarre...behaviour...(or whatever the hell he was doing).

You don't have to use either, but it's just a suggestion.

Keep up the great work!

~Pelo

Bigfoot3290 responds:

Believe it or not, I've actually considered both of your suggestions. I'm thinking about sticking with the birds, since they have greater character development in this episode. I'm pretty sure that's what I'm gonna do, but I definitely feel like I have to bring back that manatee sometime or the other.

Thanks for the review!

[ShadowWolfTJC]

That... was strange,... but in a fairly good way.

Reminded me for a bit of those weird and fairly funny Aqua Teen Hunger Force episodes that I used to watch on Adult Swim on Cartoon Network. Pretty good work over there.

Bigfoot3290 responds:

Thanks man, and strange is well, quite the understatement.

[twanger1]

Funny as

This has real potential to become a regular spot on tele. Very well done.

Bigfoot3290 responds:

That would be something else. Thanks man.

[ivens]

Hahaha

Excellent :D
Reminiscent of Charlie the Unicorn, but better.

"Good times with ballsack" is a quote I will be remembering for a long time.

More!!

Bigfoot3290 responds:

Hahah. Try not to say it out loud, or you might lose some friends :P

[Guthren]

Why all the Hype?

I was ready all the reviews for this movie and it seems like everyone thinks this is the best thing out there since....well, the last best thing. Honestly I found this flash short to be no better than average.

The drawings were nice and clean but I could barely call it an animation because there basically was none. Some dynamism in the shots would also go a long way to making it more interesting. It had it's moments with the dialog but could still use work.

Bigfoot3290 responds:

I completely understand. I'll be honest, I didn't put in half the effort that I should of with the animation. This one was just to 'scrape the surface' so to say, sort of like a field test. It seems I've done something right (at least with the dialog), so I'll be sure to double my efforts on the animation in the sequel. Thanks for your honest review.