Ok, this is just awesome!
Seriously, this might be my favorite song (made by you) ever! :D
A flash should be made around this song. It's just so.. storytelling.
Storytelling? Yes, this song tells a story but with music instead of words.
And because everyone has a different imagination and stuff, everyone will interpret this song different and different stories will be told to them.
But of course, this song is not perfect. I did hear a few things that could be a bit better (in my opinion), like the guitary synth thing.. at 00:37 it plays a melody but the dynamics of that melody sound a bit weird. I mean, it's not like it's playing softer, but like the guitarist decided to run away like a mad man to continue his playing a half a mile from the listener. And he took his amp with him.
And the drums could be a bit more in the background too, at some places.
But, those are just minor flaws.
Anyway, story time.
''Come with me. Don't be scared, it just a building.''
Harry tried to convince Laura to go through the enormous doors that were in right in front of them.
The building that they were about to enter, was a giant castle located just outside of a tiny village.
The villagers said that the castle was pure evil and that nobody dared going near it. They didn't even know who owned it and if somebody lived there or not.
But Harry wanted to investigate it and got his friend Laura to come with him.
''Well.. alright. If you go first, i'll follow.''
Laura was convinced.
Harry grabbed her hand. Not because he was scared she wouldn't come with him, but because he was frightened himself.
Slowly Harry and Laura pushed the doors open. They were unlocked, like expected.
When they were through the doors they could see that they were in a gigantic hall. They could see this, because of the ray of light that shined through the opening of the doors.
Amazed and impressed they looked around them while they were still walking forward. They were away from the doors now and..
they closed with a bang.
Laura began to scream, but Harry who remained somewhat calm silenced her by putting his hand over her mouth.
''Calm down'' he whispered. And Laura calmed down.
There was no light coming in the room. There were no windows and no other openings. It was pitch black.
They heard something. It sounded like soft footsteps. But they got louder and louder.
Harry grabbed Laura and ran with her towards the door, but the door was closer than they thought and smacked into it. Surprisingly, they didn't fall.
Meanwhile, the sound of the footsteps was getting really loud know. The owner of the feet that produced the sound was not far away from them and both could feel and evil presence.
Laura and Harry held each other, preparing for the worst.. whatever that might be.
The footsteps stopped and a low, hair rising laugh filled the room.
Harry nor Laura could make a sound.
Suddenly they heard the sound of a blade, swooshing through the air and..
Laura was hit on her head. She died instantly and Harry felt disbelief, anger, sadness and an immense fear at the same time.
The complete darkness was a good thing now, because if Harry could've seen Laura he would have fainted.
Another swooshing sound.
Harry duct and heard the sword shattering the wooden door.
Knowing there was nothing left he could do, he ran as fast as he could in the direction the sword came from. With a great force he knocked over a person and both fell to the ground. But Harry managed to land on top of this evil monster and hit it as hard a he could. He felt he was killing it.
Fortunately, the creature which he was hitting didn't have any swords left, or Harry would've been stabbed to death.
But before Harry could kill it, the doors swung open. The light revealed a person, but it's face was blank. The only things in the face were two dark red eyes.
Harry got up and ran through the doors, which slammed shut behind him.
It was raining outside now and it had became quite cloudy too.
Harry ran away until he was at a safe distance and fell to his knees, crying loudly and screaming.
''LAURA!''
It was a dramatic scene.
I am all out of ch