some improvements still to be made
i know it's hard but you should try to improve your desing, for "the big deal" you will need to improve this... About the sound track is well chosen but i've heard it so many times.... try to make something new! anyway, i'am waiting for for it!
Nice
I liked the style and the graphics and I can't wait until you finish. The only reason you didn't get a 10 was because it's a teaser and not the real deal. I also liked the Requiem for a Dream soundtrack.
teasers/previews should be submitted to the alphas
if you want to make a teaser/trailer or info about a coming production submit it to the alphas with demo flash files at newgrounds/ngmag/alphas/
(it's in the guidelines)
Nice style and animation.
I really liked the style that you used, but there wasn't much animation. The times that you did animate a scene, like the horse riding thing, it was done very nicely. Great job.
Great
This was great. can't wait fir the real thing! Try harder on your grammar, I understand that maybe your young or maybe speaks a different language but work on that a little, ask for help. I liked the your graphics, it wowed me, good job, and the music was great also. Keep up the good work.