Hey xwaynecoltx
it was a VULTURE, not an eagle.
But you're TOO right about this being a series.
Rockit Rizz - second entry, keep on trying.
||HACk
Reviews for "Billy Blue in Black View"
um what happend to the ending
cause i didnt see one, i did like how the story was going, would be a funny series with that dude, and what was up with the eagle, well hope to see more of your work soon...
:(
nothing happens in this movie
Not Exactly Black Humor...Way to subtle
Spikey haired boy, spouts some gibberish about being nice then walks away. In an apparently unrelated incident, vulture flys by. Ohhhhhh-kay...
This one is weird because it looks like you put a lot of effor into drawing the main character and producing the sound. How come everything else looks so half done? What are those lines on the ground supposed to be? Is he supposed to be in the desert? What happend to the sky? I know when you previewed this you heard the garbled "Follow me" line. It comes all smashed in with the line before it. But most of this would be completely forgivable if your flash had a strong gag... But it doesn't. There is nothing here connected enough to be humorous.
Well, you gave it a good try, anyways. Just work getting your gag down first and foremost. Then build around that.
-everything_is_easy
it was ok (for a first)
because it was your first flash i am letting you off the hook a little bit! so i am going to let the fact that when he was talking, his words did not match his mouth. but the vulture`s wings were too big, and the concept kinda sucked, so im not giving it a great rating.
OVERALL: im not giving it a horrible score, but not a good 1 either.