Fine.
You've got faint rays of talent, try a higher fps, try easing your tweens, and dont use an anime style, but developing your own. Follow theese steps and you're well on your way to NEWGROUNDS STARDOM, Oh wait, that requires making something terribly unfunny and full of anime and copyright infringements...., Follow theese steps and be a GOOD FLASH ARTIST.
yeah, as I said this is an old work that I decided to submit, that explains some stuff like the slow fps (the main reason of why I never continued it) and thanks XD
That wasn't as good
Well my problem might be that I just watched Xionic Madness, but I couldn't even finish this one. It was a little on the boring side. A little more action and a lot less slow-mo and it would probably be pretty cool.