hah! that wasnt bad!
i'll give it a four, it was damn funny but you need to improve on 2 things.
1: the constant stluterming*, go over your work and redo what voices and sentences need to be redone.
2: perhaps you should animate the stick figures or better yet make it the same as the animation in the begining.
*stlutterming: a word i made myself to combine stuttering, stammering, and slurred speaking, slurring? slurrishness?