Very borring.
Pretty lame actually. The animation itself was lazy, not realistic at all. The models and invironment were bland, did not look like a pinball machine at all. Camera movement should have been made more dynamic, make it a little more interesting. Just sorta sat there. And....well, it just needed alot of work. Maybe look at some pinball machines, change the colour theme (add lights, and more mettalic looking), and alot of it seemed to have a wood texture, even though modern pinball machines are for from made of wood. Also, it need some kind of theme, like how all pinball machines have a theme like South Park, Lord of the Rings, and shit like that. Maybe you coulda made it outer space or something of that sort.
I dont really see any overwhelmingly positive feature in this movie. Song was alright i guess.
Anyway, work a little harder next time. Im sure you can come up with something alot better if you spent some more time and effort. Anyway, good luck.