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Reviews for "One Eternal Dream"

Very calming

This was a very good song. It's stuck in my head, and I love it. The strings in the song was what made it awsome.
Would you be okay with this song getting used in a non-commercial RPG Maker game? I will give you full credits as composer.
Again, a very good piece!

Veneox responds:

That would be amazing.

Mostly epic.

Well.. This is a review box, so I'm giving a full review: every single aspect (or most of them, since I may not remember all of them) that I did and didn't like about the song. Get ready to read some serius stuff! :P
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I loved the idea of the "Peace" and "Violence" kind of "fighting" constantly.. It was the touch the song needed to be awesome. And it did! :D
The main theme is catchy and simple (nice work on that btw :D), but it doesn't play much (not bad in this case), considering this song is 4mins long. The bridges you've composed fitted perfectly into the song. That is very good!
The notes you've chosen were simply mindblowing. They were really really really REAAAALLY epic. Great job, for real! This is how a song should be composed.
I loved the "orchestra" on the back.. There is always more than one instrument playing at the same time, and it gives a great feeling to the song. Also, the instruments you've chosen were great!
The only reason - ONLY reason - I'm giving this a 9 is because before the "ultimate break" (2:44), you kind of lost the rhythm.. It's not exactly constant, since there are many notes that last too long, or are too short, considering the main beat. That's something you need to work on. Aaaaaaaaalthooough.. After the "break", the rythm and length of the notes are perfect! Simply PERFECT!
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I sincerely belive that if you had nailed the length of the notes BEFORE the breakdown as much as you did after it, it would be the most epic song ever.
Believe me, I've been listening to this song for an entire week, for more than two hours each day. That's a looot of loops! I know what I'm talking about. If you could just work on the rhythm before the "break", it would be a FUCKING KICK-ASS SONG =DDDDDDD
I hope you don't get me wrong.. The song is awesome. If it wasn't, I wouldn't be writing such an detailed and big review, nor I would have listened to it for more than three hours today.
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Hope you work on the things you haven't done so epicly, and improve the epic stuff! Great job on this one :)
Have a good day,
Squiddy.

-- edit, 9 years later... 5/5. could be longer tho heh.

Veneox responds:

Honestly, this my most appreciated review I have gotten for any song I have done. I love how in depth you have went and how much you described the goods and bads.

I do believe that the slow down before the 2:44 lost the effect I was giving it, and would indeed be better without it. Good job in giving me that notice.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it and because of this review I will make a version 2, once I have gotten a better program with more realistic instruments to use within it.

Thank you. ;}

Its about time

Its about time someone made a song that goes from beautiful to epic in one moment. The choice and melodies you made in this song were the best crafted I may have ever heard.

More more more!

Perfect piece for my final year project!

Hi Dylan! This piece was beautifully perfect for my University final year project!
You have a mention at the end of the video.

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBOyS0 qxwrk

Thanks again, Tom

Veneox responds:

Nice, I'll check it out.

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nice piece

a very nice classical piece, has a relaxing "midevil" vibe. This HAS to be included in the new elder scrolls game :3

Veneox responds:

Thank you, and I do hope someday to produce for Games. ;}