Major points for STYLE!
1 bad point: the voices were a bit shoddy.
The ;) face man was funny, as was abusing typical anime expressions. A little longer and a little more structure for the next one, please!
Reviews for "Mr. Roux's Dojo Day"
biskits responds:
thanks dude :D
Work on the sound :)
This was a very good flash. It was cute, and your decription was right. It was a good idea and I am sure you had fun animating it. The graphics were not phenomonal, but what I loved about your graphics were the facial expressions you put on the characters. Emotions are important, and you captured them. Good job. :D You do need to work on the sound. I think you (or whoever did the voice work) may have been talking too close to the mic. Other than that, you did very well. Good job and good luck on future work!
HAhaha
I laughed at the ending, it was pure genius. In fact, I think I'll watch it again.
But yeah, your sound needs work. For example, I couldn't really understand at all what the guy in the black was saying.
Thanks for submitting!
biskits responds:
yeah that was rly sketchy but when he is shouting he is saying
"SHUT UP RIIIIICE!!!!"
and then
"YOU NOT WANT TO LEARN GBET OUTTA MY CLASS" (classic mr. roux thing to say lols
Whats with your face?
Very funny, especially " ;) " face. But your VO needs work. The sound quality really drew away from it. It was pretty well animated and it was very funny but the "blowing on the mic" sound hurt it a lot. But I still enjoyed it and I hope to see more from you one day. Great work.
*End Transmission*
Dude where's my rice?
You need better sound quality.... and also that first guy the way he talks doesn't fit the mouth patterns so much... but good try...