It was okay.
Can't take off points for lack of originality, that's for sure, but I think you should've added a little more to it (explain why he needs to get the golden sunglasses before anyone else, etc.).
It was okay.
Can't take off points for lack of originality, that's for sure, but I think you should've added a little more to it (explain why he needs to get the golden sunglasses before anyone else, etc.).
Yeah... ur right! I just wanted to finish the preview... It adds suspense... Kinda...