Beautiful animation.
You are very gifted artistically, there's no doubt about it. Subject matter seemed a bit lacking, however.
Perhaps comedies just aren't your forte. Perhaps you should go more for the action adventure approach with a character named Puncher. You talent seems like it would be better suited for that genre. If you do want to bring laughs to people, I would suggest, with all honesty, that you colaborate with somebody who is better at eliciting laughs from people. After all, the better the scores you get, the better your batting average, right?