good one
that was a pretty good animation. a little bit short overall, but this one was pretty nice to watch. it had a very nice concept behind it, good graphics and character in it, good audio in it and it offered some pretty nice entertainment. i can sure see why that you said this one is your 'best single flash to date'... it was pretty nice.
Well this was actually my longest so far I think. :P But oh well, some like it long. :) Glad you liked it and you liked the song, and thanks for the review.
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^^Good Points^^
Heh, a movie made completely by you, even the music. Very cool and a very commendable effort on your part. It made me smile to watch this. Pretty good drawings and the lyrics were funny as well.
^^Needs Improving^^
In parts the song sounded a bit disjointed, as if you messed up in parts or were just improvising or something. Maybe just some more practice before you actually record.
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Yeh, thanks. This one is 100% made by me, and I don't know about anyone else but I feel this is one of my best flash works to date graphics wise. But unfortunatley that's not reflected in the score. :P Well, the song may have been a bit undercooked, but it still did the job I wanted it to.
Hmm
Well I'm no musical expert (0 music reviews says it all) but that music didn't sound that good to me, I liked the idea behind the song with the tv and the rhymes were smart too. Graphics and animation were good quality and the whole clip had a kind of ''bored and lazy'' feel to it, so I think that goal was achieved. Overal it's good, 3/5.
You wouldn't believe how hard it is to play the electric drum set, play guitar and sing at the same time, so I only chose the two I was best at. ;P
Glad you liked it. I try my best. X) Thanks for the review.
Mixed feelings
Watching this with a mind to reviewing it, I've gone on a real rollercoaster of how to rate this flash. You've actually made it quite difficult for me, which says a lot.
The tune is decent, though I would suggest that you employ something to keep your tempo a little better, as you didn't quite stay to the set pace and it sounds a little off, particularly when you switch to the chorus and back. That and you're playing all of 4 chords maximum, which is very basic.
Still, I'm not a music critic, so I've got to rate the animation as well. You've done a good job animating the whole thing, so you can build on that. The plot was good and you did stay reasonably true to the lyrics. I'd draw your attention to "Sitcoms or Documentaries", where the character holds up scrubs for sitcoms. Why not take that slightly further and hold up a DVD of a documentary, like Life on Earth, or something?
Still, keep on playing and give us some more flash music videos, I'll look forward to them
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Well this song is a basic, but fairly effective song at getting the mood across, which is all it needs to do to be catchy really. :) I was thinking about having him hold up a Documentary, but I'm a bit lazy. I'll try my best to keep making music videos. Glad you liked it, and thanks for the review.
good, but what was the theme?
im wondering if it had something to do with boredome but strike me if i'm wrong
Well, it had more to do with TV actually, but you're close. :)