Needs some improvement.
Your sprites could be improvised a bit more, and you need to work on your text boxes. They were cut off sometimes like the time with the Ambulance people. Okay story, but again, improve your improvisation.
Needs some improvement.
Your sprites could be improvised a bit more, and you need to work on your text boxes. They were cut off sometimes like the time with the Ambulance people. Okay story, but again, improve your improvisation.
This...
This... This... (Why do I keep typing, This... Thi-STOP!) Ok this is not good, or bad but can be improved.
MAJOR ISSUE: You needs toos learns how to spells...Bettersesest...
Improvements needed...
Story a little more understandable, like a button that tells you the main story, the characters, and other usefull information that people usualy read after they watch the movie.
So yeah, this needs improvements, but it's still...
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"It was okay"
I know you tried to make it like SMBZ but that dragon ball z effect
you were going for did not work out.
Also,GET SOME BETTER SPRITES!
only for story
i gave u six starsonly cuz the story wasnt bad, but the characters, and the fisghts, were lame, take the stry and start all over agian dude...
Lol Golden Sun Attacks
Maybe seen it two or three times on newgrounds.
Blue bolt, Pyroclas, spark plasma, Air slash. Thats all i saw