good.
I dunno why you asked me to reveiw 10 on this through MSN, but since I'm nice I will reveiw ten.
I also don't have much else too do. :P
Reviews for "Super Sprite Chronicles 2"
Leet-Productions responds:
Haha I didn't even ask you too lmfao.
Great!!!
Nice movie!!! Keep up the greatness!
Great!
It was really good. I just saw the other one as well, and it looks like the third one is going to be awesome.
Good: Well done sprites, great animation, use of Castlevania. Serious.
Bad: Wayyyyy too short.
Hurry up and finish yo!
Leet-Productions responds:
Rushing me is what's making them so short, haha.
Good, yet lots of room for improvement.
Hey, really nice idea you have going on here, but even if you feel like you're being rushed (I read your response lol), post up on the latest movie saying that it's going to be a while and we'll understand --most of us at least ^_^-- make the length longer, but not too long to where we're bored to tears. Since you're just starting off, it wouldn't be too bad to go for two/three times the length of this current one. Then if people like your idea, then make 'em longer.
~Clifjumper0403
Leet-Productions responds:
Very constructive, thank you.
It's good, but it could be better.
Here's a few things I noticed in Chapters one and two.
CONS:
1. In the first chapter, some of the text was difficult to read. (White text on an off-white background. Etc.) A text box will fix that. I noticed you started using text boxes in chapter two, but they went away. Why?
2. Try using a different font. It's not that I have a problem with the current font... it's just a bit harsh on the eyes.
3. The text flew by way too quickly. Try either slowing it down some, or make a 'next' button so the viewer can advance the text when s\he's ready.
4. Length. It's too short in my opinion. Chapters one and two could probably be combinded into one. Make them a little longer, and you'll be fine.
5. Why did you kill Link off in Chapter One?
6. Music. The music gets a bit redundant after a while. Try putting some hard-core music into the fight scenes. Like... Metallica or some group like that.
PROS:
1. Good plot. You started a very intreging plot in chapter one, and stuck to it. Good. Just continue like that.
2. Excellent use of sprites. I've never seen a better use of sprites. Congratulations.
3. The fight scenes are great and very well planned out (Albeit a bit short, but hey.) There needs to be a few more (And slightly longer) fight scenes, but they'll come in later in the next chapters. Right?
All-in-all you've got a very good build up, and I like it. You need to change a few things here-and-there, and you'll have a great series everyone should watch. Right, well, I've overstayed my welcome, I think, so I'll leave you to it.
~Xenolord
Leet-Productions responds:
THANK YOU! Verrryy constructive. I'll take all of this in to consideration. Also, to answer your question about Link, just because he's dead doesn't mean he can't be in the story anymore.