Not bad
Th graphic could use some help, but the story and music worked well,
Reviews for "The bike ride to school"
ohguck responds:
***This goes to all people knocking the graphics***
Yes I know I could have done better graphics and I can but the point being: I was trying to give it a look similar to south park. But anyway thanks for the reveiws guys.
I love happy endings
It could have been shorter and You seriusly need to work on the graphics but as i said I love happy endings
well...
it was funny but i dont really seewhy you needed a graphic tablet to make an animation of that quality its good but ive seen and made better with a mouse. over all though it made me laugh....oh and that man is a blatent peedo
NAWWT BAAAAIRRDDDDD
Nice one Geordie. At first I was a lil dissapointed at the tweening and such, but hey, you had the balls to go out of the usual zone. The sound was good, despite the fact that I hate Misery. You don't get any score for interactivity because it isn't interactive. I laughed a little at the dancing guy, but not at the actual joke of the flash. I voted 5 for ya mate :D
You've got a talent.
And not just at making good flash. The flash looked good, sounded good and it wasn't too short or too long or too pointless. That's where I think your real talent is: making a story seem interesting.
I clicked this flash expecting some boring old flash about something I could care less about (basically a free BLAM point). You've made your trip to school a very interesting little story. It kept my attention and I really wanted to see how your character/you would snap at the constant hellos. I think that if you develop this talent, you will become a great storyteller, whether using flash, a photo or movie camera, or a pen or pencil.
Sorry for rambling on a bit. So, in the end, you did a great job! :)