Reviews for Captain R: Game Ranger 2b

[compulsive]

2b is much much better

I have to admit that my quality of life has been made worse by the fairy gangrape, but overall this was a lot better than the first half. I realize that it's just two of you doing the voices, but you should try to recruit more voices "actors" to help with the next installment because everyone is starting to sound alike (I know it couldn't be helped). I think you missed a great opportunity for great lines when Ron runs into the cave. I do like Sonic's lines so far, he seems to be getting the most out of the screenwriting in this one. You've said before that you don't do much of a script, and that's a shame because I think this could be a true classic if a little more planning went into story and dialogue.
Now that I'm done bitching and being a snob, GREAT WORK!

Sunrie responds:

Thank you for writing the review.

The fairy scene was definitely one of those things where I wondered if we crossed a line, but then ended laughing so much at it animated, that the vote was to keep it in.

There's actually three of us doing voices in this one, four if you count the one line Richter had in the first half. In the next coming installments, we're going to have more people doing voices, which is going to help a lot.

Like you said, the biggest concern is everyone sounding a like. Even with changing the sound of our voice, the cadence and the way we pronounce things are harder to mask.

The only thing that had a script was the bonus scene. Everything else is pretty much me giving the person the basis of what is going on and then asking for three different recordings. We know where the series is going, it's just that we find that the voicing sounds forced when we used a script.

Personally, I don't think you were bitching and being a snob. Really, if those few things are the only critiques you have, I consider this a win. Thank you very much!

[Clovis15]

"If someone else didn't want him, why would we?"

Sorry it took so long, but I finally got around to seeing it like you asked. That was, uhm, weird. There was less cussing than the first episode, but there still was a lot of cussing. Furthermore, you people have a very mean sense of humor. I know this may work some audiences, but for me I cringed at a lot of the parts. The movement, and some of the voices, were definitely a step up in this episode. That was definitely a good thing. Sorry, but I just don't have much more to say about this.

Sunrie responds:

From Sunrie:
I'm not really sure I understand what you mean by a "very mean sense of humor". I thought it kind of matched some of your humoring style with things you've brought up in your storylines.

As for the cussing, the Game Ranger is going to swear a lot because that's just who he is. The guy is white trash to the core, which is what we're basing the interactions around. He's also based off of a real life person who really acts this way, so we're treating the character like dirt, which is where most of the humor comes from.

The next animation is going to be even more fluid and we have six new voice actors joining the cast for new characters. Obviously certain characters aren't going to be swearing and there will be a lot more action.

From Wyldfyre1:
...I'm a little confused on the review. Thanks for the review, though.

[XwaynecoltX]

LOL Cute

I am not going to deduct any points or fault you for the simplistic visuals, Infact I liked it for its simple feel and touch, I Did however enjoy the Animation work presented in this submission, It felt very fitting with how there was alot of Focus and stuff going on. Haha this was really funny you made some good humor out of this the "ZELDA" theme is always a plus, infact all of these are pretty good. This was notbad at all, pretty decent flash here, I enjoyed it from the get go, there are some things that could be worked on in order for it to be even better, dont get me wrong its pretty good as is but with some more extras it would be even better, but anyways decent flash I look forward to more from you. I was pleased with this besides a few basic things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there will not be any sort of quick solution that here, but this is a section that you can find some helpful tips. So I do hope you use some but anyways here are some possble improvement ideas. Maybe a larger view screen to see more details and whatnot, but other then that you have covered all the basis.

~X~

[addictedtoflash]

Sonic and Shadow

More specifically, Shadow. He alone redemed this episode enough for me to give that a five. Everything before that, is complete fail, especially the rape. Good god that was horrendously stupid. I'll pretend everything before Sonic and Shadow showed up never happened. My previous complaints stand, with apparent exceptions for Sonic and Shadow.

Questions? Comments? Comebacks? Flames? PM me.

-End Transmission-

Sunrie responds:

More of Shadow? So, you're a furry, to. Shouldn't you be off yiffing in a fur pile somewhere instead of wasting everyone's times?

There was a warning about sexual content. You're 17, so you shouldn't have been watching that to begin with. I know, I know, your mother told you that kind of thing only happens when two people LOVE each other, but out there in the real world, that sort of thing happens. Ron is an abuse character and a douche, so that's why it's in there and is extremely funny.

Your previous complaints are just as worthless as your current ones.